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    • My opinion about Life for success

    • I think and my opinion, Working hard without science is the same empty, Got a science but it also can not use is the same lie, Do not have the science and do not want to work, so do not ever dream of success.
    • No matter how small the value of success, if I can enjoy it and feel it certainly will bring happiness and satisfaction, that's the true meaning of success over the years.
    • I am not afraid to be old, because of course will be aging. but I am afraid not become mature, because the attitude of maturity become the path of happiness and glory.
    • Success is like a shadow, increasingly pursued further away So, I will ignore it and I will to live life what I can, surely Success will following me.
    • The biggest mistake I did was if I rely my life with other people.

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    • I think and my opinion, Working hard without science is the same empty, Got a science but it also can not use is the same lie, Do not have the science and do not want to work, so do not ever dream of success.
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    • I think and my opinion, Wthat working hard without science is the same empty, Got a science but it also can not use is the same lie, Do not have theempty. It is a lie that I know science. I do not know science and do not want to work with it, so I do not ever dream of success.
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    • ¶I think andIn my opinion, Wworking hard without science is the same empty, Got a science but it also cmeaningless. To know science and not to use is the same lie, Do not have thet is is not work. If you do not know/respect science and do not want to work, so do not then you can never dream of success. (See comment).
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    • No matter how small the value of success, if I can enjoy it and feel it certainly will bring happiness and satisfaction, that's the true meaning of success over the years.
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    • No matter how small the value of my success, if I can enjoy it andI feel it will certainly will bring happiness and satisfaction, t. That's the true meaning of success over the years.
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    • No matter how small the value of success, if I can enjoy it and feel itmy success may seem to others/ society, if I can enjoy it then I feel that it will certainly will bring me happiness and satisfaction, t. That's the true meaning of success over the years.
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    • I am not afraid to be old, because of course will be aging. but I am afraid not become mature, because the attitude of maturity become the path of happiness and glory.
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    • I am not afraid to be old, because of course will be aging. but and I am not afraid notof becomeing mature, because the attitude of maturity becomeis the path of happiness and glory.
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    • I am not afraid to begrow old, because of course will be aging. butwe all age. I am not afraid not become maturof wise, because the attitude of maturity becomeis the path of happiness and glory.
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    • Success is like a shadow, increasingly pursued further away So, I will ignore it and I will to live life what I can, surely Success will following me.
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    • Success is like a shadow, increasingly pursued further away So, I will ignore it and I will to live life with what I can, s. Surely Success will following me.
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