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Hello!
Hi!
I'm from Croatia and I like to travel a lot.
- I would like to learn English more fluently.
- I was learning English in school and I visited London couple of times.
But I have problems with grammar mostly.
So correct me when im wrong.

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câu 1
- Hi!
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câu 2
- I'm from Croatia and I like to travel a lot.
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câu 3
- I would like to learn English more fluently.
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- I would like to ~~learn~~improve my English ~~more~~ fluentlcy.
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câu 4
- I was learning English in school and I visited London couple of times.
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- I was learning English in school and I visited London a couple of times.
  zpaolo Comments
  
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câu 5
- But I have problems with grammar mostly.
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- So correct me when im wrong.
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