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  • Racism in the USA - conclusion

    • We can conclude by saying that racism and fight against racism are expressed in very different ways through visual arts.
  • Some of the directors have set their film around events that concern the whole American nation, such as the Secession War.
    • Thus they have shown that African Americans have gained the respect of their white fellow citizens by their courage, forcing them to reconsider their avocation of the white supremacy.
    • Elsewhere film directors have make used of far more personal situations, for example with such characters as the Detective Tibbs.
    • In both case, it is obvious that African Americans have drag out their human rights through their own personal actions, and even sometimes, through their death while possibly meeting the help of some of their white fellows such as Shaw or Kowalski.
  • As a matter of fact, the famous US “melting pot” has more than once worked in favor of human rights and national integration. 

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    • We can conclude by saying that racism and fight against racism are expressed in very different ways through visual arts.
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    • We can conclude by saying that racism and the fight against racism are expressed in very different ways through visual arts.
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    • Some of the directors have set their film around events that concern the whole American nation, such as the Secession War.
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    • Thus they have shown that African Americans have gained the respect of their white fellow citizens by their courage, forcing them to reconsider their avocation of the white supremacy.
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    • Thus they have shown that African Americans have gained the respect of their white fellow white citizens by their courage, forcing them to reconsider their avocation of the white supremacy.
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    • Elsewhere film directors have make used of far more personal situations, for example with such characters as the Detective Tibbs.
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    • Elsewhere film directors have make used of far more personal situations, for example with suchsuch as with the the characters as the Detective Tibbs.
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    • Elsewhere, film directors have makde used of far more personal situations, for example with sucha characters such as the Detective Tibbs.
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    • In both case, it is obvious that African Americans have drag out their human rights through their own personal actions, and even sometimes, through their death while possibly meeting the help of some of their white fellows such as Shaw or Kowalski.
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    • In both cases, it is obvious that African Americans have drag out their human rightsincreased their standing through their own personal actions, and even sometimes, through their death while possibly meeting thdeath. They sometimes receive help ofrom some of their white fellows such as Shaw or Kowalski.
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    • As a matter of fact, the famous US “melting pot” has more than once worked in favor of human rights and national integration. 
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