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  • Believe me.

    • She was so angry with me Sir.
  • She wouldn't believe to me anymore.
  • She is still so mad because she is too much jealous about me, she love me so much.
    • It was because she found that letter of my neighborhood into the trash, it was not so important for me.
    • In that letter there was the complain about the annoying noise during the nights before she returned back to home from her travel for work.
    • Sir, I said to her the noise it was from the television programs in the late nights, I fall asleep during all those nights with the television turned on on not proper so good programs.
    • I know I know, it is so strange to explain all that, but, believe me, after she started for the one week job travel around their new market I was so depressed.
  • It was a good opportunity for her business, a really great opportunity for her company too.
    • In that time, as I said, I fall so depressed, so I decided to buy a television and a play station to watch some video and to play some video game to get some good time watching some programs or playing some video games.
    • It was just to let feel me better, better than what was and what is now my new bad mood.
  • Some time I had notice that the neighborhood was looking at me because the noise, so I'm not surprised now about all this mess.
  • However, then, so, after that mess I decided to turn back the television to the shop because I found that it was not a good idea to spend my time watching Television.
  • But it was impossible, they wouldn't get it back.
  • So, I really don't know why, but I decided to make a gift to the my best wife's friend that she come to visit me several times in the late evening, and it was just to learn how to use the the remote control and overall the joystick to play some games together. What you said?
  • Oh please, believe me.

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    • In that letter there was the complain about the annoying noise during the nights before she returned back to home from her travel for work.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In that letter there was the complain about the annoying noise during the nights before she returned back to home from her travel for workvoyage for bussines purposes.
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    • Sir, I said to her the noise it was from the television programs in the late nights, I fall asleep during all those nights with the television turned on on not proper so good programs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • SirMadam, I said to her, the noise it was from themidnight television programs in the late nights, I faell asleep during all those nights with the television turned on on not proper so goodTV set on inappropriate programs.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • I know I know, it is so strange to explain all that, but, believe me, after she started for the one week job travel around their new market I was so depressed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I know I know, it is so strange to explain all thatis, but, believe me, after she started for the onethe first week jobof travelling around their new market I was so depressed.
      GeoorgianaGeoorgiana profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • In that time, as I said, I fall so depressed, so I decided to buy a television and a play station to watch some video and to play some video game to get some good time watching some programs or playing some video games.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In that time, as I said, I fallwas feeling so depressed, so I decided to buy a televisionTV and a play station to watch some video ands, to play some video games, to get somehave a good time watching some programs or playing some video games.
      GeoorgianaGeoorgiana profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • Some time I had notice that the neighborhood was looking at me because the noise, so I'm not surprised now about all this mess.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • However, then, so, after that mess I decided to turn back the television to the shop because I found that it was not a good idea to spend my time watching Television.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • So, I really don't know why, but I decided to make a gift to the my best wife's friend that she come to visit me several times in the late evening, and it was just to learn how to use the the remote control and overall the joystick to play some games together. What you said?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
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