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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from vaness182 - English

    • february 3th.

    • Today is Monday, February 3th.
    • Today I said to my copine: no matter how far I'm waiting, I'm waiting for you, are you'll waiting for me?
    • I'm a distrustful person, I don't know why how I'm, but, once I trusted in a person that I don't met, today is my copine.
    • When I stay with her, like my little cousin nothing else matter, not soccer not music neither the time, in myself I feel me so great.
    • The Valentine's Day I can stay with her, then I have in my closet room a present for her in a box, the box are flying because has some globes and balloons tied like up (movie), This way I will said the she important to myself.
    • I don't have trust in the neighbour, because she talk some things with me after she are going to talk bad of me.
    • I sought in the boxes on the floor floor, I couldn't found, my sister came after five minutes found it.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Today I said to my copine: no matter how far I'm waiting, I'm waiting for you, are you'll waiting for me?
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Today I said to my copine:girlfriend " no matter how farlong I'mll waiting, I'mll waiting for you, arewill you'll waiting for me?"
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      Äänestä nyt!
    • Today I said to my copine: no matter how far I'mgirlfriend: "No matter how long I have to waiting, I'mll waiting for you, a. Are you'll waiting for me?"
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    • Today I said to my copine:friend, no matter how far I'm waitingwe are, I'm waiting for you, are you'll waiting for me also?
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      Äänestä nyt!
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    • I'm a distrustful person, I don't know why how I'm, but, once I trusted in a person that I don't met, today is my copine.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I'm a distrustful person, I don't know why how I'I am, but, once I trusted in a person that I doidn't meet, today is my copine(he/she) is my (friend,boyfriend/girlfriend).
      amoor89amoor89 profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I'm a distrustful person, I don't know why how I'I am, but, once I trusted in a person that I hadon't met,. today, she is my copinegirlfriend.
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    • I'm a distrustful person, I don't know why how I'm, but, once, but when I trusted in a person that I hadon't meet yet , today is my copinehat person will be my friend.
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    • When I stay with her, like my little cousin nothing else matter, not soccer not music neither the time, in myself I feel me so great.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • When I stayam with her, like my little cousin nothing else matter, not soccer not music neither the time, in myself I feel me so great with her.
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    • The Valentine's Day I can stay with her, then I have in my closet room a present for her in a box, the box are flying because has some globes and balloons tied like up (movie), This way I will said the she important to myself.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • TheOn Valentine's Day I can stay with her, then I have something that i put in my closet room a present for her in a box, but something happen, the box are flying because has some globes and balloons tied like up (movie), This way I will said the. I will tell her, that she is important to myselffor me.
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    • I don't have trust in the neighbour, because she talk some things with me after she are going to talk bad of me.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • I don't have any trust in theto my neighbour, because she talk some things with me, after she are going to talked bad ofabout me.
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