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I miss my puppies
- A month ago, my dog have 4 puppies and I was so happy.
- Not only because the puppies, otherwise it was the first time that she get pregnant.
- But yesterday, my mother gift 3 of them and now I'm so sad, i really miss my little babies.

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- A month ago, my dog have 4 puppies and I was so happy.
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- A month ago, my dog hgave 4birth to four puppies and I was so happy.
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- A month ago, my dog haved 4 puppies and I was so happy.
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- Not only because the puppies, otherwise it was the first time that she get pregnant.
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- ~~Not only because the puppies, otherwise~~Also, it was the first time that she geot pregnant.
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- Not only because of the puppies~~, otherwi~~ being born, but because it was the first time that she geot pregnant.
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- But yesterday, my mother gift 3 of them and now I'm so sad, i really miss my little babies.
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- But yesterday, my mother g~~ift 3~~ave away three of them ~~and n~~. Now, I'm so sad~~, i~~. I really miss my little babies.
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