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  • Essay

    • As the challenges we struggle are on global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and I agree with this view.
    • If countries foster a good relationship having opportunities to pool knowledge, their infrastructure would be improved.
    • For example, a country can explore oil resource effectively and build high-speed rail with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperated country.
    • These a like actions are drive of economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
    • A relationship with good communication access also can prevent countries from wars.
    • It is no doubt that resources play vital role in economic development and to occupy more natural resources to have economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbour countries to have boundaries tension.
    • Therefore, develop a good national relationship is the key to solve these problems in peaceful methods such as consulting and negotiating rather that using weapons.
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation or other social connection to deal with domestic problems would weaken a country’s independence.
  • These countries are not able to solve problems independently when facing challenges.
    • Some Africa countries solve its food shortage by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather paying attention to food technology development, thereby those countries are unlikely to have self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.

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  • cümle 1
    • As the challenges we struggle are on global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and I agree with this view.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • As the challenges we struggle are on a global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and, which I agree with this view.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • For example, a country can explore oil resource effectively and build high-speed rail with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperated country.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • For example, a country can explore oil resources effectively and build high-speed rails with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperateding country.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • These a like actions are drive of economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • These a like actions are what drive ofs economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • It is no doubt that resources play vital role in economic development and to occupy more natural resources to have economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbour countries to have boundaries tension.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • It is no doubt that resources play a vital role in economic development and to occupy. With occupancy of more natural resources to havefor economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbouring countries to have boundariesy tensions.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • Therefore, develop a good national relationship is the key to solve these problems in peaceful methods such as consulting and negotiating rather that using weapons.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Therefore, developing a good national relationship is the key tofor solveing these problems inwith peaceful methods, such as consulting and negotiating rather thatn using weapons.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation or other social connection to deal with domestic problems would weaken a country’s independence.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation reliance, or other social connection to deal with domestic problems, would weaken a country’s independence.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
  • cümle 9
  • cümle 10
    • Some Africa countries solve its food shortage by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather paying attention to food technology development, thereby those countries are unlikely to have self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Some African countries solve itstheir food shortages by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather than paying attention to food technology development, thereby tho. These countries are unlikely to have a self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 10YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10