Korekty

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  • Essay

    • As the challenges we struggle are on global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and I agree with this view.
    • If countries foster a good relationship having opportunities to pool knowledge, their infrastructure would be improved.
    • For example, a country can explore oil resource effectively and build high-speed rail with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperated country.
    • These a like actions are drive of economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
    • A relationship with good communication access also can prevent countries from wars.
    • It is no doubt that resources play vital role in economic development and to occupy more natural resources to have economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbour countries to have boundaries tension.
    • Therefore, develop a good national relationship is the key to solve these problems in peaceful methods such as consulting and negotiating rather that using weapons.
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation or other social connection to deal with domestic problems would weaken a country’s independence.
  • These countries are not able to solve problems independently when facing challenges.
    • Some Africa countries solve its food shortage by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather paying attention to food technology development, thereby those countries are unlikely to have self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • As the challenges we struggle are on global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and I agree with this view.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • As the challenges we struggle are on a global scale, it is argued that health partnership between countries is increasingly important and, which I agree with this view.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • For example, a country can explore oil resource effectively and build high-speed rail with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperated country.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • For example, a country can explore oil resources effectively and build high-speed rails with the help of foreign experts and the technologies imported from the cooperateding country.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • These a like actions are drive of economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • These a like actions are what drive ofs economic growth, which can upgrade people’s living standards, especially for those disadvantaged countries who lack of advanced technologies to develop themselves.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • It is no doubt that resources play vital role in economic development and to occupy more natural resources to have economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbour countries to have boundaries tension.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • It is no doubt that resources play a vital role in economic development and to occupy. With occupancy of more natural resources to havefor economic prosperity, it is easy for neighbouring countries to have boundariesy tensions.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • Therefore, develop a good national relationship is the key to solve these problems in peaceful methods such as consulting and negotiating rather that using weapons.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Therefore, developing a good national relationship is the key tofor solveing these problems inwith peaceful methods, such as consulting and negotiating rather thatn using weapons.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation or other social connection to deal with domestic problems would weaken a country’s independence.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • On the other hand, extensive reliance on international cooperation reliance, or other social connection to deal with domestic problems, would weaken a country’s independence.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Some Africa countries solve its food shortage by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather paying attention to food technology development, thereby those countries are unlikely to have self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Some African countries solve itstheir food shortages by receiving food aid from the rest of the world rather than paying attention to food technology development, thereby tho. These countries are unlikely to have a self-contained economy, which poses a threat to a country’s safety.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10