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  • About Moscow

    • Life is so sort, so the time what remains for myself I want to spend on the thing which I like, and I like to travel, see the world, meet new people.
    • When they hear that I'm from Moscow, people ask how to live simple Muscovites and what interesting places they can see in my city?
    • And it is true, but what do I recommend?
    • My city has changed so much in recent years that sometimes when I arriving somewhere I do not recognize familiar places.
    • And I decided to dedicate a few hours in week for city where i was born, where I live and which i love very much that I can know which Moscow is now.
    • February 1 a new year begins, Horse comes into its own.
    • So why not try to ride it and do not rush to get acquainted with your favorite city?
    • Decided, 2014 year I devote to Moscow, I want to walk on favorite places and meet news that to talk about how we live in Moscow, because sometimes reading what is written in foreign guidebooks can not understand - who invented it?
  • And so, Moscow Life which it is.

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    • Life is so sort, so the time what remains for myself I want to spend on the thing which I like, and I like to travel, see the world, meet new people.
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    • Life is so short, so the time what remains for myself I want to spend on the thing which I like, and II want to spend on the thing I like with the time I have left, like to travel,. I want to see the world, and meet new people.
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    • Life is so short, so the time what remains for myself I want to spend on the thing whichI want to spend the time I have left doing something I like, and I like to travel,. I want to see the world, and meet new people.
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    • When they hear that I'm from Moscow, people ask how to live simple Muscovites and what interesting places they can see in my city?
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    • When otheyrs hear that I'm from Moscow, peoplethey ask how to live simple Muscovites (?) and what interesting places they can see in my city?
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    • When theypeople hear that I'm from Moscow, peoplethey ask how to live simple Muscovites live and what interesting places they can see in my city?.
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    • My city has changed so much in recent years that sometimes when I arriving somewhere I do not recognize familiar places.
      투표하세요!
    • My city has changed so much in recent yearsly that sometimes when I arriving somewhere I do notdon't even recognize familiar places.
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    • My city has changed so much in recent years that sometimes when I arrivingo somewhere I do not recognize familiar places.
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    • And I decided to dedicate a few hours in week for city where i was born, where I live and which i love very much that I can know which Moscow is now.
      투표하세요!
    • And I decided to dedicate a few hours ineach week forin the city where iI was born, where I live and whichthat i love very much so that I can know which Moscow as it is now.
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    • Decided, 2014 year I devote to Moscow, I want to walk on favorite places and meet news that to talk about how we live in Moscow, because sometimes reading what is written in foreign guidebooks can not understand - who invented it?
      투표하세요!
    • Decided, 2014And so, 2014 is the year I will devote to Moscow, I want to walk onin my favorite places and meet news tha people. I want to talk about how we live in Moscow, because sometimes reading what is written in foreign guidebooks can not understand - who invented it?foreign guidebooks just doesn't get the whole picture.
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