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- Hello, my name is Barbara.
- I would like to meet people to improve my english.
- I learnt this langage during 10 years at school but I have just the base.
- I will be happy to help you in french in return.

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- Hello, my name is Barbara.
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- I would like to meet people to improve my english.
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- I would like to meet people to improve my eEnglish.
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- I learnt this langage during 10 years at school but I have just the base.
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- I ~~learnt~~studied thise language ~~during~~for 10 years at school but I ~~have just~~only know the baseics.
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- I will be happy to help you in french in return.
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- I will be happy to help you in french inby return.
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- I will be happy to help you ~~in f~~with French in return.
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