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  • January 15th

  • Today is Tuesday, January 15th.
    • Today I went to school, normally when I go to school, I wake up 4.30 but today everybody went to school at 7 o'clock.
    • Still we don't have time table.
    • Then, I don't have anything to do, well, everybody played, talked, or like me, I stayed with the girls of my class, and I lay on the Xiomy's legs.
    • While, I drew a Tweety for Xiomy, she saw that I got cold, and she lent me her jacket.
  • When I finished the sketch, she read my mind and she gave me the colors.
    • At 9 o'clock, everybody had the formation, later, the teachers said us: "the classes finished, go at you home".
    • Xiomy picked up me and we were walking home.
    • I felt very sad, when the teacher said to Xiomy, she are a 10th B grader, and I'm 10th A grader.
    • I felt very sad, when the teacher said to Xiomy, she are a 10th B grader, and I'm 10th A grader.
    • They separated us, when she told me, my tears started to came streaming down my face.
    • Later, we went to the main street to get a bus, when we waited the bus, I give to her a subtle kiss in her cheek that no one sees at that moment.
  • She invited me to the mall from the other side of the town, on the south town.
    • When finally we got on the bus, I ran for take the double chair, when we took the chair I took her legs like pillow, she said to me: "What's on you mind", and I said to her: "I dont want that you will forget me 'cause you will stay on other class".
    • She were speechless.
    • She looked up on my eyes and said me: "I don't know that we do will on the future", I'm very romantic, at that moment I listened a cute song on the cell phone that said : "I don't shine if you don't shine", after, I sang to her that.
    • I was waiting a sign, but when I thought that nothing would happen, she said to me: "pit it out of your mind, I love U, and gave me a quite long long long kiss".

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    • Today I went to school, normally when I go to school, I wake up 4.30 but today everybody went to school at 7 o'clock.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today I went to school, n. Normally when I go to school, I wake up 4.30 but today everybody went to school at 7 o'clock.
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    • Then, I don't have anything to do, well, everybody played, talked, or like me, I stayed with the girls of my class, and I lay on the Xiomy's legs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Then, I doidn't have anything to do, well, everybody played, talked, or like me, I stayed with the girls of my class, and I layid on the Xiomy's legs.
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    • At 9 o'clock, everybody had the formation, later, the teachers said us: "the classes finished, go at you home".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At 9 o'clock, everybody had the formation, later, the teachers said to us: "the classes are finished, go ato your home".
    • At 9 o'clock, everybody had the formation, l. Later, the teachers said us: "the classes have finished, go at youyou can go home".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Later, we went to the main street to get a bus, when we waited the bus, I give to her a subtle kiss in her cheek that no one sees at that moment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Later, we went to the main street to get a bus, when wile we were waiteding the bus, I giave to her a subtle kiss ion ther cheek thatand no one sees ataw that moment.
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    • When finally we got on the bus, I ran for take the double chair, when we took the chair I took her legs like pillow, she said to me: "What's on you mind", and I said to her: "I dont want that you will forget me 'cause you will stay on other class".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • When finally we got on the bus, I ran forto take the double chair, when we took the chair I took her legs like pillow, she said to me: "What's on your mind", and I said to her: "I don't want that you willyou to forget me 'cause you will stay on the other class".
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    • She looked up on my eyes and said me: "I don't know that we do will on the future", I'm very romantic, at that moment I listened a cute song on the cell phone that said : "I don't shine if you don't shine", after, I sang to her that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • She looked up on my eyes and said me: "I don't know twhat we do will odo in the future", I'm was very romantic, at that moment I was listeneding to a cute song on the cell phone thatand said : "I don't shine if you don't shine", after, I sang to her that.
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  • câu 17
    • I was waiting a sign, but when I thought that nothing would happen, she said to me: "pit it out of your mind, I love U, and gave me a quite long long long kiss".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was waiting for a sign, but when I thought that nothing would happen, she said to me: "pit it out of your mind, I love Uyou, and she gave me a quite long long long kiss". ¶
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