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- To summerise, museums should integrate entertainment in their sevices and by doing this they can attract young people, passing historical knowledge in varitiey ways.

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- To summerise, museums should integrate entertainment in their sevices and by doing this they can attract young people, passing historical knowledge in varitiey ways.
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- To summearise, museums should integrate entertainment in their services and by doing this they can attract young people, passing historical knowledge in vari~~tiey~~ety of ways.
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- To summearisze, museums should integrate entertainment into their services ~~and b~~. By doing this they can attract young people~~, pass~~ while offering historical knowledge in a vari~~tiey~~ety of ways.
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