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..... Need Improvement.....
At last I've got to know that my English is very weak .I'm quite embarrased.The think that makes my english so poor is inattentiveness.My mind says something and I write something.This makes me feel embarrased .
Please if anyone out here can help me to improve my English I'd be really glad .You can take it as a language exchange or may be one sided cause everyone here know French.But, if anyone is interested to learn French than He/She is kindly invited.I know my way of writing is so poor but I wanted it to be improved.
I'm also interested to learn some slangs,new words,etc,.It'll help me a lot in future.
I'm eagerly waiting for a English native speaker .... ..... Thanks ;)

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- ..... Need Improvement.....
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Oració 1
- At last I've got to know that my English is very weak .I'm quite embarrased.The think that makes my english so poor is inattentiveness.My mind says something and I write something.This makes me feel embarrased .
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 1
Oració 2
- Please if anyone out here can help me to improve my English I'd be really glad .You can take it as a language exchange or may be one sided cause everyone here know French.But, if anyone is interested to learn French than He/She is kindly invited.I know my way of writing is so poor but I wanted it to be improved.
  Vota ara!
- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 2
Oració 3
- I'm also interested to learn some slangs,new words,etc,.It'll help me a lot in future.
  Vota ara!
- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
Oració 4
- I'm eagerly waiting for a English native speaker .... ..... Thanks ;)
  Vota ara!
- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4