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  • A funny childhood experience

    • I well remember one story which happened to me when i was a child. when i went to our local school, after classes we used to be asked to help farmers who had wineyards on the hills which located near our village.
    • Our teachers would take us there and we used to work for one or two hours picking the harvest.
    • One day, by the way it was Sunday my best friend Ilkhom and I decided to pay a visit to one of the nearest wineyards and steal some grapes.
    • We left for our destination at noon and we were sure that nobody would guard the wineyard at that time for it was summer and it is usually boiling hot at this period of year at my place.
  • So finally we were there counting on the weather taking advantage of the proper time for stealing the grapes.
    • Each of us had one little pail which could intake not too much grapes. So we began!
    • I was just reaching for the second bunch of the grape when suddenly a warning cry of my friend came. "Run,run!
    • The guard is coming!" I was shocked and could do nothing but stood steadily unable to do anything.
  • When I realised that I'd better run it was too late.
  • The guard was already standing by me siezing my hands.
    • Ilkhom managed to escape.
  • The guard was looking at me with his scary eyes and abruptly he began to shout at me - Well, now you want some grapes-aaa?
  • then he stuck his right hand into my pail and took a bunch of grapes out of it and stuck it directly into my mouth. my mouth

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  • câu 1
    • I well remember one story which happened to me when i was a child. when i went to our local school, after classes we used to be asked to help farmers who had wineyards on the hills which located near our village.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I well remember one story which happened to me when i was a child. when i I went to our local school, and after classes we used to bwere asked to help farmers who had wvineyards on the hills which located near our village.
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    • I well remember well one story which happened to me when i was a child. when i went to our local school, after classes we used to be asked to help farmers who had wineyards on the hills which was located near our village.
      DefhanDefhan profile picture Comments
    • I well remember well one story which happened towith me when iI was a child. wWhen iI went to our local school, after classes we used to be asked to help farmers who had wvineyards on the hills which were located near our village.
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  • câu 3
    • One day, by the way it was Sunday my best friend Ilkhom and I decided to pay a visit to one of the nearest wineyards and steal some grapes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One day, by the way it was on a Sunday my best friend Ilkhom and I decided to pay a visit to one of the nearest wvineyards and steal some grapes.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • We left for our destination at noon and we were sure that nobody would guard the wineyard at that time for it was summer and it is usually boiling hot at this period of year at my place.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We left for our destination at noon and we were sure that nobody would guard the wvineyard at that time forbecause it was summer and it iwas usually boiling hot at this period of year at my place.
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  • câu 5
    • So finally we were there counting on the weather taking advantage of the proper time for stealing the grapes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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  • câu 7
    • I was just reaching for the second bunch of the grape when suddenly a warning cry of my friend came. "Run,run!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was just reaching for the second bunch of the grapes when suddenly aI heard the warning cry of my friend came., "Run, run!"
      glenogleno profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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  • câu 12
    • The guard was looking at me with his scary eyes and abruptly he began to shout at me - Well, now you want some grapes-aaa?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • then he stuck his right hand into my pail and took a bunch of grapes out of it and stuck it directly into my mouth. my mouth
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13