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Text from vaness182 - English

  • Januaty 10th.

  • Today is Sunday, January 10th.
  • I have some purposes, like learn French, English, learn swimming, go to the University, create my company, and do more exercises (have a good body).
  • After to the accident I don't know why, but I can't remember anything, after the accident while I regain consciousness, I was seeing my daddy but I don't knew how was he?, After to go to the hospital, I woke up completely, I wake up with new ideas, new projects, but I must go at the University and study and win my university scholarship, only I have the university scholarship during my first semester.
  • I feel so proud because I'm the first from Faculty of Math.
  • Now, I come back of write after the holidays, but, maybe I combe back to holidays in the next weekend because, I couldn't enjoy to the maximum the oportunity.

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    • I have some purposes, like learn French, English, learn swimming, go to the University, create my company, and do more exercises (have a good body).
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    • After to the accident I don't know why, but I can't remember anything, after the accident while I regain consciousness, I was seeing my daddy but I don't knew how was he?, After to go to the hospital, I woke up completely, I wake up with new ideas, new projects, but I must go at the University and study and win my university scholarship, only I have the university scholarship during my first semester.
      Vote now!
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    • Now, I come back of write after the holidays, but, maybe I combe back to holidays in the next weekend because, I couldn't enjoy to the maximum the oportunity.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5