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I believe it must my learning partner, Mia , in my view, I really think she is quite nice, he paid a visit to my home when I was nervous about preparing my IELTS exam.

From other members at that school, I heard that she was also prepared for the IELTS exam .Soon we became good friends .

She is thoughtful ,a typical example I can show you is that she taught me how to make clear points in an essay during this visit, and surprisingly, under her guidance , I got the right way to back up my points in writing.

Well, last point how I feel about this visit, maybe a short story can better express it.

Although we studied together at school ,sometimes I felt I was inferior to Mia as she always thought of clever things I could never think.

Everyday I came back to home ,I just felt stressful and lack of confidence about the exam.

Mia realized it and decided to come to my place to help despite the long distance between our living places.

I was completely moved by his consideration ,so warm!

I think I will never forget those days we stayed together to prepare the exam.

So you can see my feeling about this visit.