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Tekst van Francky2A - English

  • A day of cross

    • Today was a day very important.
    • I an athlete, I do long cross, and today have been the corsican championship UFOLEP and it was my first cross in cadet.
    • We have to run 4700 meters and quickly to have a good place.
    • On the departure, I was seventh.
  • After the first turn, I was fourth.
    • Then, after the second turn, I was 3rd.
    • Finally i finished second.
    • A good place but I prefer 1st.
    • Thank you to correct this copy !

HELP ELKE ZIN TE CORRIGEREN, AUB! - English