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Text from rangdong27 - English

    • The first day I went to school

    • Every autumn, seeing leaves falling, I remember my first day at school when I was six years old.
    • That was a cold, foggy morning.
    • My mother took my hand, walking along the village road.
    • On the trees, birds were singing.
    • On the sky, there were silver clouds.
    • The sun was rising from the mountains.
    • A new day, a new period of my life.
    • I was eager and a little worry.
    • I'd like to meet teachers and new friends, to discover the school.
    • However, it was something too strange for me.
    • So, i was anxious a bit.
    • After one hour walking, we reached the school.
    • My mother smiled at me and went back home while I was stepping through the entrance.
    • At that time, I was really scared.
    • That was the first time I was in a world so strange with strange people.
    • I cried loudly, just wanted to go back with my mother but the entrance of school was closed.
    • Suddenly, someone patted on my shoulder which startled me.
    • I swung around and saw a woman with a gentle face smiling at me.
    • Her kind eyes made me calm.
    • I smiled at her then she took me into my class.
  • It turned out that she was my head teacher.

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