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    • This letter is writing to support Ms. Minyan LI, a promising young lady, to pursue further education.
    • Minyan had been studying for four years in Marine Technology at our college since Sep. 2008.
    • The student performed well during school time and comprehensively improved her overall skills.
    • As Minyan’s head teacher for four years, I’m really appreciated her personalities and passion in participating in different extracurricular activities.
    • During the four years, she had assisted me in managing the class and organizing various student activities, which was very impressive.
    • For example, she helped to organize the monthly youth league meetings and showed her creativity in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, she is a very independent and persistent girl.
    • In daily life, she was well-organized and did well in time management.
    • As for as I know, she insisted in practicing Chinese zither everyday and also participated in many performances.
    • In terms of personalities, Minyan is very nice and always ready to help others in need.
    • She is very popular among her peers for her easy-going personalities and optimistic life attitudes.
  • Overall, Minyan is a promising student and I am pleased to recommend her to your university for further education.
    • I am certain that she will try her utmost to realize her dream and develop herself in a more comprehensive way.
  • If you need further information about Ms. LI, please do not hesitate to contact me.

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    • This letter is writing to support Ms. Minyan LI, a promising young lady, to pursue further education.
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    • This letter is writingI am writing this letter to support Ms. Minyan LI, a promising young lady, who is going to pursue further education.
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    • This letter is writingI am writing this letter to support Ms. Minyan LI, a promising young lady, to pursue further education hoping to further her studies.
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    • As Minyan’s head teacher for four years, I’m really appreciated her personalities and passion in participating in different extracurricular activities.
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    • As Minyan’s head teacher for four years, I’m have really appreciated her personalitiesy and her passion infor participating in different extracurricular activities.
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    • As Minyan’s head teacher for the last four years, I’m really appreciated her personalitiesy and her passion in participating in different extracurricular activities.
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    • During the four years, she had assisted me in managing the class and organizing various student activities, which was very impressive.
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    • During the four years, she hads assisted me in managing the class and organizing various student activities, which was very impressive.
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    • During these four years, she had assisted me in managing the class and to organizinge various student activities, which was very impressive.
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    • For example, she helped to organize the monthly youth league meetings and showed her creativity in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, she is a very independent and persistent girl.
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    • For example, she helped to organize the monthly yYouth lLeague meetings, and showed her creativity in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, sShe is a very independent and persistent girl.
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    • ForOne example, s of her impressive activity, She helped to organize the monthly youth league meetings and showed her creativability in organizing programs such as pantomime, music performance, etc. Besides, she is a very independent and persistent girl.
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    • As for as I know, she insisted in practicing Chinese zither everyday and also participated in many performances.
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    • As foar as I know, she insisted in practicing Chinese zither every day, and also participated in many performances.
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    • As foar as I know, she insialso interested in practicing Chinese zither everyday and also participated in many performances.
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    • Overall, Minyan is a promising student and I am pleased to recommend her to your university for further education.
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