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Văn bản từ Littlemori - English

  • My ancestor

    • Lumba was my ancestor .
    • She lived in Ivory Coast and belonged to the people Abron from Ghana in the fifteenth century .
    • Although Lumba was a daughter of the people , she was a highly respected person because she was a sculptor .
    • Instead of the sculpture is very important in Ivory Coast it is present in religion , politics, social life .
    • One day the King Adou Bini asked him to produce a large number of masks " zoomorphic " ( animal-shaped ) that all the inhabitants of the Fulani able to wear.
    • He also asked him to gather all the people in his kingdom , and gave him a period of 7 days, with no other information .
    • The people had only 60 inhabitants, was then a feasible task for Lumba .
    • She carved masks days and nights without stopping.
    • She was happy to share his works for everyone.
    • The last day she gave each a mask that matched their personalities.
    • They all headed to the kingdom of Adou Bini .
    • If the King had ordered to bring all the people with masks, it is because the Portuguese explorers arrived was to take gold in the region.
    • The goal was to scare with these masks.
    • Indeed, the explorers had frightened ' s these masks figures Antidotes Hyenas and Lions , and escaped .
    • To thank Lumba , the king gave him a privileged spot in the kingdom , she became a sculptor of civilization Fulani Abron .
    • I must say that I had a vision of abstract art, but I understood from Lumbra that Art can become a peaceful weapon against any types of problems , political, social ...
    • I found this way of defend this very inspiring.
    • His will and perseverance to do a lot of masks in such a short time has shown me that it is possible to exceed the limits of an area we like to do . Like

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    • She lived in Ivory Coast and belonged to the people Abron from Ghana in the fifteenth century .
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    • She lived in Ivory Coast in the fifteenth century and belonged to the Abron people Abron from Ghana in the fifteenth century .who are originally from Ghana.
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    • Although Lumba was a daughter of the people , she was a highly respected person because she was a sculptor .
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    • Although Lumba was a daughter of the people , sShe was a highly respected person because she was a sculptor .
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    • Instead of the sculpture is very important in Ivory Coast it is present in religion , politics, social life .
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    • Instead of the The art (sculpture) is very important in Ivory Coast i. It is presentnoticeable in religion , politics, social life .
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    • One day the King Adou Bini asked him to produce a large number of masks " zoomorphic " ( animal-shaped ) that all the inhabitants of the Fulani able to wear.
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    • One day, the King (Adou Bini) asked himer to produce a large number of masks " zoomorphic "masks ( animal- shaped ) that all the inhabitants of the Fulani were able to wear.
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    • He also asked him to gather all the people in his kingdom , and gave him a period of 7 days, with no other information .
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    • He also asked himgave her seven days to gather all the people in his kingdom , and gave him a period of 7 days, with no other information without giving a reason for the gathering.
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    • The people had only 60 inhabitants, was then a feasible task for Lumba .
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    • The people had only 60It was an easy task for Lumba because the inhabitants, was then a feasible task for Lumba .ere only sixty.
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    • If the King had ordered to bring all the people with masks, it is because the Portuguese explorers arrived was to take gold in the region.
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    • If tThe King had ordered to bring all the people with masks, it is to gather because the Portuguese explorers had arrived was to taketo steal gold in the region.
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    • Indeed, the explorers had frightened ' s these masks figures Antidotes Hyenas and Lions , and escaped .
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    • Indeed, the explorers hadwere frightened ' sby these masks figures Antidotesof wild animals like the Hyenas and Lions , and escapfled .
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    • To thank Lumba , the king gave him a privileged spot in the kingdom , she became a sculptor of civilization Fulani Abron .
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    • To thank Lumba , the king gave him a privileged spoter an important role in the kingdom , s. She became a sculptor of civilization, Fulani Abron .
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    • I must say that I had a vision of abstract art, but I understood from Lumbra that Art can become a peaceful weapon against any types of problems , political, social ...
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    • I must saymention that I had a vision of abstractnegative view of such an art, but I understood from Lumbra that Aart can become a peaceful weapon against any types of problems ,whether political, social ..., etc.
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    • His will and perseverance to do a lot of masks in such a short time has shown me that it is possible to exceed the limits of an area we like to do . Like
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • His will and perseverance to do a lot of masks in such a short time has shownhas proved to me that itanything is possible. to exceed the limits of an area we like to do . Like
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