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  • Middle school union party

  • Last month, I attended my middle school union party which located in YUEXIU DISTRICT.
  • That was a music club.
  • Attending this party included our classmate and English teacher.
    • Unfortunately, I late for that party at that moment.
    • Suddenly, I discover our client documents made a mistake for the reason that I have to deal with it.
    • When I been to the music club which I made apologized to them.
    • Because I promised that I would join in the party in time.
  • And then, I would like to sang the song.
  • At the moment, I was taken to went to the other room for playing the dices.
  • Actually, our classmate set a rule of this game.
  • At first, the dices have 6point.
  • You should said 3points of 6times if someone said 3points of 4times.
  • Eventually, we would count all the point which whether you are tell a lie or not.
  • That pretty funny.
  • However, one of our classmate was lose this game so that she was punished by us.
  • She sang the song which the voice was exciting.
  • From this activity, we share our interesting things each other.
  • It seem to be turned to campus life which was happy hour.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - Aҧсуа бызшәа