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  • About IT

  • Since two decades, we notice the rise and grow of communication technology such as the internet, mobiles, and there services like take photos, do calls, send email, watch videos ans so on.
    • However, these changes are infotunately more bad than benefic.
  • And I share the idea that The IT have a bad face or a bad side like differents things, and i will expose inconvenient.
    • First, one of the most drawback of the IT is insecurity, users can feel inconfortable throughout his operation specially when he have to enter his privacy data or information about his bank card, sometime the privacy policies are not so clear as that they seem to be.
  • Furthermore, the web in nowdays are full of bad uses of marketing which spy the users.
  • That's the way to say that in the e-marketing there are so many unfair methods like pop up, cookies and viruses which drive internautes to trouble.
  • More over, the use of IT , eventhrough it help to going the distance, it can create an insociable behavior specially for shy people.
  • And in my opinion it push people to live in there virtuel bubble.
  • Some friends can keep in touch only behind their screen without any real contact.
  • In summary, the use of IT have so many derive, it can be more bad than benefic.
  • That's way i think that people must use it with more wiseness.
  • To sum up it's the maner to say that users should be careful.

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    • Since two decades, we notice the rise and grow of communication technology such as the internet, mobiles, and there services like take photos, do calls, send email, watch videos ans so on.
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    • And I share the idea that The IT have a bad face or a bad side like differents things, and i will expose inconvenient.
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    • First, one of the most drawback of the IT is insecurity, users can feel inconfortable throughout his operation specially when he have to enter his privacy data or information about his bank card, sometime the privacy policies are not so clear as that they seem to be.
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    • First, one of the most drawback of the IT is insecurity, users can feel iunconmfortable throughout his operation specially when he have to enter his privacy data or information about his bank card, sometimes the privacy policies are not so clear as that they seem to be.
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    • That's the way to say that in the e-marketing there are so many unfair methods like pop up, cookies and viruses which drive internautes to trouble.
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    • More over, the use of IT , eventhrough it help to going the distance, it can create an insociable behavior specially for shy people.
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