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  • 婚姻

    • 这个星期我课的题目是婚姻。上个星期你们帮助我了。 我的中文老师说我的网上的朋友们怎么能力得改正我的句子。 谢谢你们！ Nellie 1．If you have marriage problems, you will surely lose your safety net (ie life guarantee) immediately.
  • Therefore, it is better for you to find a job now rather than have total economic dependence on your husband.
    • 1．如果你有婚姻问题，你肯定就随即会失去生活的保障。所以，与其在经济上完全依靠你的丈夫，你宁可现在找工作。 2．The standard of living is on the rise.
  • If the situation remains like this, it is possible that our family income won’t be enough to live on.
  • Even though your company has said that they would raise your income a little, I bet it won’t be much. 2.
    • 生活水平越来越提高了。如果情况维持加强， 有可能我们家庭工资勉强够维持生活的。 即使你的公司说他们会提高 一点你的收入， 我想它不会是很多。 3.
    • Marriage itself is a learning process.
    • Couples learn how to respect and understand each other.
  • However, couples may feel hurt due to the conflicts and fights in their marriage.
    • 3． 婚姻，它自己是学习过程。 妇女成为互相尊敬和了解。 但是， 因为婚姻里的争议和吵架，妇女可以被伤害。

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