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- 下雨外睡
- 爬进去睡袋时带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我不暖和但是还行。

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- 下雨外睡 i think it's the better that you also write the english that can help the other understand your meaning and easier to coorrect the sentence.
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- ~~下雨外睡~~在外露营的时候下雨了
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- 下雨外睡的时候跑到外面睡觉。
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- 爬进去睡袋时带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我不暖和但是还行。
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- 爬进去睡袋时带还穿着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我不会太暖和但是还行好。
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- 爬进去睡袋时~~带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体~~身上还穿着雨衣，水瓶贴在身上，，我不算暖和但是还行。
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- 当我爬进去睡袋时~~带着雨衣在衣服上，~~，身上还穿着雨衣，热水瓶靠着身体，，我虽然不暖和但是还行也还凑合。
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- 我穿着雨衣爬进去睡袋~~时带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我不~~，身体靠着热水瓶，虽然不是很暖和，但是还行也还可以。
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- 爬进去睡袋时~~带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我~~我衣服上套上了雨衣，有热水瓶贴在身上，虽不暖和但是还行算不错。
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- 爬进去睡袋时~~带着雨衣在衣服上，水瓶靠着身体，，我不暖和但是还行。~~，还穿着雨衣，热水瓶贴在身上，不算暖和，但还行。（其实我知道你想表达的意思，哈哈。你也可以说“钻进睡袋时还穿着雨衣，把热水瓶贴在身上，虽然不算暖和，但还过得去。”）
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- 爬进去睡袋时带穿着雨衣~~在衣服上~~，水瓶靠着身体，，我不暖和但是还行。
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