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Text from Beyzaxd - 한국어

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Hellooooo
Hi!
I am Beyza from Turkey.
I am interested in Korea and Korean.
Can you help improve my Korean?
I really wanna learn Korean.
Please send me messagees :)

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- I am interested in Korea and Korean.
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