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- Holidays
- Kyou biru wo takusan nomimashita.
- Watashi no ichiban sukina biru wa Heineken desu.
- Ima sandoitchi ga taberu desho.Kino boku to tomodachi no party ikimashita. Suki deshita!

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- Holidays
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- ~~Holidays~~休日きゅうじつ kyuujitsu
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- Kyou biru wo takusan nomimashita.
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- Kyouô biiru wo takusan nomimashita.¶今日ビールをたくさん飲みました。
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- Watashi no ichiban sukina biru wa Heineken desu.
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- Watashi no ichiban sukina biiru wa Heineken desu.¶私の一番好きなビールはHeinekenです。
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- Ima sandoitchi ga taberu desho.Kino boku to tomodachi no party ikimashita. Suki deshita!
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- Ima sandoitcchi gawo tabe~~ru desho.~~masu. Kino (boku toｗa) tomodachi to/no party ni ikimashita. ~~Suki deshita!~~ Tanoshikatta desu! ¶今サンドウィッチを食べます。昨日（僕は）友達と/のパーテイーに行きました。楽しかったです。
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