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    • ロシアでは二月の第二十三は、すべての人のための祝日です (The twenty third of February in Russia is the holiday for all men).
    • 私の息子も幼稚園でそれを祝った。(My son also celebrated it in the kindergarden), 彼らは兵士として服を着て軍事歌を歌いました。(They dressed as soldiers and sang military songs).
    • この日は多くのロシアの都市でパレードや花火があります (On this day there are parades and fireworks in many Russian cities).
    • 人々は二十世紀の戦争紛争に参加した兵士を記念する。(People commemorate soldiers who took part in the war conflicts of the twentieth century).
    • 私にとって、私はすべての男性を祝福します。(As for me I just congratulate all the men) 私は地球全体の平和を願っているので、誰も怒りから守る必要はありませんでした。(I wish peace on the whole Earth, so that it weren't necessary to defend anyone against agression)

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    • ロシアでは二月の第二十三は、すべての人のための祝日です (The twenty third of February in Russia is the holiday for all men).
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    • ロシアでは二月の第二十三日は、すべての人のための祝日です国民の祝日で、男性の日です。 (The twenty third of February in Russia is thea national holiday for all men).
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    • ロシアでは二月の第二十三日は、すべての人のため国民の祝日です (The twenty third of February in Russia is the holiday for all men).
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    • 私の息子も幼稚園でそれを祝った。(My son also celebrated it in the kindergarden), 彼らは兵士として服を着て軍事歌を歌いました。(They dressed as soldiers and sang military songs).
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    • 私の息子も幼稚園でそれを祝っいました。(My son also celebrated it in the kindergarden), ¶
      彼らは兵士      としての服を着て軍事歌を歌いました。(They dressed as soldiers and sang military songs).
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    • 私の息子も幼稚園でそれを祝っの日を祝いました。(My son also celebrated it in the kindergarden), ¶
      彼らは      兵士として戦闘服を着て軍事歌を歌いました。(They dressed as soldiers and sang military songs).
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    • この日は多くのロシアの都市でパレードや花火があります (On this day there are parades and fireworks in many Russian cities).
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    • この日は、多くのロシアの都市ではパレードや花火があります (行われています)。(On this day there are parades and fireworks in many Russian cities).
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    • 人々は二十世紀の戦争紛争に参加した兵士を記念する。(People commemorate soldiers who took part in the war conflicts of the twentieth century).
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    • 人々は、二十世紀の戦争紛争にで参加した兵士を記念しまする。(People commemorate soldiers who took part in the war conflicts of the twentieth century).
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    • 人々は二十世紀の戦争や紛争に参加した兵士を記念する追悼します。(People commemorate soldiers who took part in the war conflicts of the twentieth century).
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    • 私にとって、私はすべての男性を祝福します。(As for me I just congratulate all the men) 私は地球全体の平和を願っているので、誰も怒りから守る必要はありませんでした。(I wish peace on the whole Earth, so that it weren't necessary to defend anyone against agression)
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    • 私にとって、私はすべての男性を祝福しいます。(As for me I just congratulate all the men) ¶
      私は      地球全体の国際平和を願っているのでて、誰も怒り侵略から守る必要はありませんでしたがないように願っています。(I wish peace on the whole Earth, so that it weren't necessary to defend anyone against agression)
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    • 私にとって、私はすべての男性を祝福します。(As for me I just congratulate all the men) ¶
      私は      地球全体の平和を願っているので、誰も怒りから守る必要はありませんでした誰もが侵略におびやかされることなく、世界が平和になることを願っています。(I wish peace on the whole Earth, so that it weren't necessary to defend anyone against agression)
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