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Poésie
- Il a passé sa vie à vouloir les étoiles..
- il ne remarqué pas les lucioles

arianelindemuteJuly 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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Sentence 1
- Il a passé sa vie à vouloir les étoiles..
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- Il a passéa sa vie à vouloir les étoiles...
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Sentence 2
- il ne remarqué pas les lucioles
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- ¶iIl ne remarquéait pas les lucioles.
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- ¶iIl ne'a pas remarqué ~~pas~~ les lucioles
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- ¶iIl ne remarquéa pas les lucioles
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