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please who can correct this for me , if there were mistaks

The story of Her "Really want to be a Peshmarga"
"Dad! I want to be a peshmarga when I grow up, I want to defend my land my people, I want to be great like them",She was jumping from happiness & also her eye was bright & it hides a deep sorrow for the all people & All kids who lost their childhood & lives in the war by the Enemies Life..
Her father understood her passion & clear soul, she is just a Kid & like all kids every day she a different dream but, this one was different it was shouting out from her deep feeling from her heart her soul..
"Every one can be a Peshmarga in hisher study in hisher field" The Father replied with a deep voice .

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raj_55555 profile picture raj_55555November 2014
"Dad! I want to be a peshmarga when I grow up. I want to defend my land and my people. I want to be great like them". She was jumping from happiness, her eyes were bright & it hid a deep sorrow for the all people & All kids who lost their childhood & lives in the war by the enemies.
Her father understood her passion & her clear soul. She was just a Kid & like all kids, every day she had a new dream. But this one was different, it was shouting out as a deep feeling from her heart, her soul!
"Every one can be a Peshmarga in his/her study in his/her field", the Father replied in a deep voice .
  • raj_55555 profile picture raj_55555November 2014
    you are most welcome, although I made a typo, in line two it's "for all the people"