GIVE ANSWERS - English

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Can you correct this paragraph please?

Dear Tony,

I've already read your letter.

How are you? I really miss you.

I eat out once a week, sometimes with my family and sometimes with my friends.

When I go out to eat, expecially with my friends, I usually eat a pizza and I usually eat pizza with chips.

My favourite restaurant is La Pizzeria, in Napanee, Ontario, used to be a childhood haunt of my favourite singer, Avril Lavigne.

The owners of the restaurant have honoured her on their menus by boasting the parlour is the home of Avril's favourite pizza and giving her name to her favourite pizza that contains olives. pepperoni, mushrooms.

I ate this pizza when I visited Napanee and I love it.

I also saw the fan book and sign it that every once in a while the owners give her it.

The restaurant is quita big and they have also shown us Avril's chair and on the back she had written "Avril was here, this is my chair".

How about your favourite restaurant?

Love from, Giusy.

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PancakeTommy profile picture PancakeTommyDecember 2012
eSpecially*, instead of eXpecially,
I usually eat pizza ("a" - was needless)
...sign it everytime to show my support.
The restaurant is quite big.
Generally - nicely done! ;]
ameliathefabulous profile picture ameliathefabulousDecember 2012
It's already really good, your english is excellent. There may be a slight error in th line about the fan book, I'm not really sure what you meant there.