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Essay about zoos - 180 words - Could you correct it ? Thank you!

We can find zoos in a lot of cities everywhere in the world. Do zoos have a positive impact on the conservation and education of animals?

At first, some species only exist in zoos because their natural environment isn't favourable anymore. This place is their last chance of survival. Even these animals have less freedom than in the nature, they can eat, drink, move and interact with other members of the same species.

Then, the relationship between the animal and the human can be great when the love is there. It's possible for the human to educate the animals and develop with them a certain behaviour. They can prepare a show or work altogether on a field to cultivate food.

Unfortunately, it can happen that some human don't show compassion for the animal and that some are mistreated.

As conclusion, the zoos are a great opportunity for people to be in contact with animals, develop a relationship and educate them even it can happen that some animals are abused. For some species, the zoos are their last chance of survival.


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dewijones profile picture dewijonesOctober 2017
Zoos don't educate animals.
You have the wrong verb here.
dewijones profile picture dewijonesOctober 2017
I think you want 'firstly' not 'at first'

At first is related to time
languagelove1 profile picture languagelove1October 2017
Hello
You wouldn't say "in the nature" you would say in nature. Overall everything is perfect
vincent profile picture vincentOctober 2017

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