GIVE ANSWERS - English

Hi! I had  to write a composition, but I would like to see my mistakes, so I ask you to correct it if you have time to do it, I would be veri grateful to you.

"During last times several deforestations have been carried out in order to satisfy the economical interests of the big companies. Theese events has inevitably damaged the landscapes of the most beautifull parts of the world, not less has caused serious problems in terms of pollution and climate change. In fact nowadays glaciers are melting, the world climate is becoming warmer and the Ozon Hole is increasing, bringing about more problems regarding the toxicity of sunrays. Although all this could appear not strongly linked to deforestation phenomenon, actually it largely contributes to the climate change and the growth of pollution, as scientific researches show. So, I think that in order to fight this phenomenon, which affects negatively not only men but first and foremost vegetation and wildlife, it is necessary that all people become more aware of firstly the existence of the problem, since most people ignore it, voluntarily or involuntarily, secondly the extent and the seriousness of the situation, that involves not just the natural environment, or only fews populations, but the entire world. So in my opinion it's fundamental that a sort of general and world consciousness comes out in order to face the realty and to prevent the Earth from being further damaged. Moreover if I think this is necessary, I think also it is not sufficient, because I believe another important aspect that must be taken in consideration is the economical interest, that is actually the main cause of what we are discussing about. In fact I am deeply convinced that all big companies and the whole industry sector must be willing to give a part of their profits up, otherwise no sincere fight may be carried out, but only a formal one, full of words and empty in the facts. Finally I sustain that a lot of environmental projects must be put forward in order to preserve the wildlife and the vegetation which has not been killed yet."

I hope not to have made too many mistakes, thank you for your time. =)