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The taste of life

Try to something new every day is wonderful, the food in our lives is very important. My restaurant is called: “Taste of Life" or in Italian “La dolce vita", because the business idea is about Italian culture and food. It is located near to the famous area "Chapultepec". The concept is very general, it is a quiet place. You can go with your family, friends, couple or for business meetings.

Italian cuisine dishes are prepared with variety of cheeses, also with lots of vegetables: spinach, tomatoes, peppers, zucchinis, mushrooms, these are the most commons. The special dish of the house is the lasagna. Many people have visited us and they have loved our dessert too. It is a type of Italian cake called “Tiramisú”.

One year ago, we started working and we have had great success and growth. Thanks to the recommendation of customers and all sales that we decided to open a branch. Advertising on social networks, and especially the business plan are our key points. Our team of work and the courage to persevere it keeps us in the market. It is always necessary to innovate, so this is the form for you to can reach your goals.

 

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Mozez profile picture MozezJanuary 2016
there isnt the need of adding the word 'it' for the second last sentence. and i guess that 'our team of work' was meant to be the word 'teamwork'?
Mozez profile picture MozezJanuary 2016
i dont really get the first sentence, maybe change 'Try to' to Trying
Mozez profile picture MozezJanuary 2016
grammar correction?