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- My Score Was Improved in 150 Points.（スコアが150点上がった）
- got a result of Toeic test.
- Although I haven't archived my target yet, my score was improved by 150 points.
- I have a another Toeic test next month.
I'll do my best.

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- My Score Was Improved in 150 Points.（スコアが150点上がった）
  투표하세요!
- My Score ~~Was~~ Improved inby 150 Points.（スコアが150点上がった）
  Blu3bLaze 댓글
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- got a result of Toeic test.
  투표하세요!
- I got athe result of my Toeic tTest.
  Blu3bLaze 댓글 1
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Although I haven't archived my target yet, my score was improved by 150 points.
  투표하세요!
- Although I haven't archived my target yet, my score ~~was~~ improved by 150 points.
  Blu3bLaze 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
- Although I haven't archieved my target yet, my score was improved by 150 points.
  NiKoLauS27 댓글
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I have a another Toeic test next month.
  투표하세요!
- I have a another Toeic tTest next month.
  Blu3bLaze 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I'll do my best.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4