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Hi my name is Akos Hungary.
- I'm here for the first time on this site and wish to learn the English language German or Russian.
- Would like to gain a lot of friends in the World and I hope you can help me :)) My English is not perfect yet I would like to develop and practice thanks:))h

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- Hi my name is Akos Hungary.
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- I'm here for the first time on this site and wish to learn the English language German or Russian.
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- ~~I'm here for the~~This is my first time on this website ~~and wish~~. I would like to learn ~~the~~ English ~~language~~, German or Russian.
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- Would like to gain a lot of friends in the World and I hope you can help me :)) My English is not perfect yet I would like to develop and practice thanks:))h
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- Would like to ~~gain~~have a lot of friends infrom different parts of the Wworld ~~and~~. I hope you can help me ~~:))~~, My English is not perfect yet ~~I would like to develop and practice thanks:))h~~but I am hopping to improve soon.
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