Korektoj

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Text from Mialee - English

  • Personal Satment for Applying Futher Study

  • If someone has no motivation in his profession, it is hard for him to get outstanding achievements at the position.
  • In contrast, if someone considers his work is worthy, he will devote himself to realizing the value.
  • I used to think that teaching was stable, without too many challenges.
  • But after plenty of extracurricular reading, teacher’s qualification training and participating in practical teaching, I do believe that teaching is one of the most creative jobs, because the main objective is teaching children who are unique and change from day to day.
  • What’s more important, I established faith that education is which I am eager to devote myself to, not only because i can fulfill my value and get satisfaction but also it is the job has profound influence to individuals and society.
  • I have thought deeply and realised that a teacher is not only what I want to be but I am also suitable to be.
  • From years of studying, I noticed having a clear logic, study transfer ability and self-reflection are my features of learning and problems solving, which are vital to be an excellent teacher.
  • In addition, I have a great fondness of all of the nature things, such as oceans and forests, so I really love to spend time with children who are, as far as I am concerned, the purest things in the world.
  • When I worked as a practice teacher in Junjing Dongqu Kindergarten, I found helping all children to make progress is my greatest happiness.
  • During my internship period, I made some toys for the children, for I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ which is raised by John Dewey.
  • I made a big box containing paper-made tiger, rabbit and other animals whose mouths were open.
  • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that children may feed the paper-made animals accordingly.
  • It is practicable for children to acquire basic knowledge and they may get more information about animals and foods after the game.
  • To be a qualified teacher, I have to promote myself with both language learning and teaching skills.
  • Every day when I finished my work in kindergarten, I would take part in oral English course in training institute.
  • In my spare time, I will read some books about teaching and apply the theory from books into my actual situation in kindergarten.
  • Learning language and teaching skills are never a burden but an enjoyment for me because it is my dream to become a respectable teacher in my future.
  • To fulfill my dream, your esteemed university is a paradise for me to further my study because The Hong Kong Institute of Education is the unique teaching university in Hong Kong and the Early Childhood Education Program is perfect fit for my career development.
  • Besides, I have a keen interest in Home-School-Community Partnerships in Diverse Society module because the importance of community is easily ignored.
  • Making good use of the resources at home, school and community may benefit for the children.
  • In addition, Nurturing Social-Emotional Well-being of Children module poses a significant topic in my mind covering how we can improve children’s sense of well-being through education.
  • Studying above modules comprehensively, I have a keen desire to study in your university.
  • After graduation, I am planning to get into the field of education as a preschool teacher who is professional and responsible, to make more contribution to the education system in China.
  • Overall, I will be really appreciative if there is an opportunity to study in The Hong Kong Institute of Education.
  • If successful, I will dedicate myself to the program and make every single effort to enhance my teaching skills and honor the university.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • If someone has no motivation in his profession, it is hard for him to get outstanding achievements at the position.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • But after plenty of extracurricular reading, teacher’s qualification training and participating in practical teaching, I do believe that teaching is one of the most creative jobs, because the main objective is teaching children who are unique and change from day to day.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • What’s more important, I established faith that education is which I am eager to devote myself to, not only because i can fulfill my value and get satisfaction but also it is the job has profound influence to individuals and society.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • From years of studying, I noticed having a clear logic, study transfer ability and self-reflection are my features of learning and problems solving, which are vital to be an excellent teacher.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • In addition, I have a great fondness of all of the nature things, such as oceans and forests, so I really love to spend time with children who are, as far as I am concerned, the purest things in the world.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • When I worked as a practice teacher in Junjing Dongqu Kindergarten, I found helping all children to make progress is my greatest happiness.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • During my internship period, I made some toys for the children, for I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ which is raised by John Dewey.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that children may feed the paper-made animals accordingly.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • It is practicable for children to acquire basic knowledge and they may get more information about animals and foods after the game.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • In my spare time, I will read some books about teaching and apply the theory from books into my actual situation in kindergarten.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
    • Learning language and teaching skills are never a burden but an enjoyment for me because it is my dream to become a respectable teacher in my future.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
    • To fulfill my dream, your esteemed university is a paradise for me to further my study because The Hong Kong Institute of Education is the unique teaching university in Hong Kong and the Early Childhood Education Program is perfect fit for my career development.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
  • Frazo 19
    • Besides, I have a keen interest in Home-School-Community Partnerships in Diverse Society module because the importance of community is easily ignored.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19
  • Frazo 20
  • Frazo 21
    • In addition, Nurturing Social-Emotional Well-being of Children module poses a significant topic in my mind covering how we can improve children’s sense of well-being through education.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 21
  • Frazo 22
  • Frazo 23
    • After graduation, I am planning to get into the field of education as a preschool teacher who is professional and responsible, to make more contribution to the education system in China.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 23ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 23
  • Frazo 24
    • Overall, I will be really appreciative if there is an opportunity to study in The Hong Kong Institute of Education.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 24ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 24
  • Frazo 25
    • If successful, I will dedicate myself to the program and make every single effort to enhance my teaching skills and honor the university.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 25ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 25