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My 2nd school day!
- Today is Friday, January 11th, Today was the second day of school activites, I went wore sport uniform because I had PE class.
- When I was running, I stepped bad and I fell, I remembered that I alone, my dear is away.
- Later from bad time, when it was time to go home, I went walking to Aunt's home and later Cousin's home, and now I stay in my home.
- It's four o'clock, I got hungry, I did my lunch, this time it was broth, rice, tropical salad, pone and tree tomato juice.
- I did every alone.
- I feel pride of myself because I know cook.
- Yesterday at night, my tears came streaming down on my face when I saw the stars on the sky, were shining above of myself alone.
- Always, I said myself : "I'm strong" but yesterday I felt little strong.
- Now, I'm thinking what will do for her when she come back.
- I like swiming, I want swim with this weather, the day is warm, I think that we are on summer, but in my country haven't seasons.
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