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Text from vaness182 - English

    • My 2nd school day!

    • Today is Friday, January 11th, Today was the second day of school activites, I went wore sport uniform because I had PE class.
    • When I was running, I stepped bad and I fell, I remembered that I alone, my dear is away.
    • Later from bad time, when it was time to go home, I went walking to Aunt's home and later Cousin's home, and now I stay in my home.
    • It's four o'clock, I got hungry, I did my lunch, this time it was broth, rice, tropical salad, pone and tree tomato juice.
    • I did every alone.
    • I feel pride of myself because I know cook.
    • Yesterday at night, my tears came streaming down on my face when I saw the stars on the sky, were shining above of myself alone.
    • Always, I said myself : "I'm strong" but yesterday I felt little strong.
    • Now, I'm thinking what will do for her when she come back.
    • I like swiming, I want swim with this weather, the day is warm, I think that we are on summer, but in my country haven't seasons.

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