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  • Lucky Escape

    • Story from real life.
  • One of my friend was traveling with a friend in the Kamaz.
    • They were on the right side of the road, no one ahead.
    • Standing in front of a traffic police inspector stopped a truck that was driving ahead of us.
    • In its body lay a bunch of iron rods getting out two meters to the left, beyond the dimensions of the machine.
  • Truck driver braked sharply.
    • At this moment, my friend looked to the right passenger window, despite what was happening.
    • In his head there was something unimaginably - vision become very good.
    • Looking at the right distance he was able to see very well all things, even very far away, as if the eyes framed glasses with good magnification.
    • Then came a strong sense bend down and pick up what has fallen.
    • For example, as if you are holding in your hands a glass goblet accidentally been dropped, and try to catch him right before he fell.
    • Lowering his head down to see what was there fell he noticed by corner of his eye that something was coming from the front.
    • Not paying attention to it, he bent down .
    • At this moment there was a screech of brakes.
    • Bunch of iron rods broke glass passing through the cabin thoroughly, just above his head.
    • Scary to imagine what would have happened if he had not put his head down.
    • This incident happened 15 years ago, but remembered well.

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