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    • December 23th.

    • Today is Monday, December 23th.
    • Today the weather was very very cold, raining almost day, and now only is very cold.
    • Today I left the house in the morning, and I feel so sad and angry with myself, because, a friend sent me a card and I can't pick up it, but I promess to send a card and a bracelet and a kisses for ser a good friend :].
    • I must work in the restaurant 24th, 25th and 26th but I will be able to talk with her, but she knows that I give my better wishes, and merry christmas and I duty a one present.
    • Yesterday, when I began my day, I beat the bed accidently in my little finger, I don't cried.
    • While I was watching the match, I bend the clothes and I noticed to my favorite jean has a new broken.
    • I bet with the guys that the Liverpool fc win but I couldn't thought that win with six goal to difference.

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    • Today I left the house in the morning, and I feel so sad and angry with myself, because, a friend sent me a card and I can't pick up it, but I promess to send a card and a bracelet and a kisses for ser a good friend :].
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    • Today I left the house in the morning, and I feel so sad and angry with myself, because, a friend sent me a card andthat I can't pick up it, but. However, I promessise to send a card and, a bracelet and a kisses for sto her, a good friend :].
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    • I must work in the restaurant 24th, 25th and 26th but I will be able to talk with her, but she knows that I give my better wishes, and merry christmas and I duty a one present.
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    • I must work inat the restaurant on the 24th, 25th and 26th but I will be able to talk with her, but s. She knows that I give my bestter wishes, and merry christmas and I duty a one. I also owe her a present.
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    • I bet with the guys that the Liverpool fc win but I couldn't thought that win with six goal to difference.
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    • I bet with the guys that the Liverpool fcFC would win but I couldidn't thoughtink that win withthere would be a six goal to difference.
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