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- correct my text
- thanks all friends for correction.this is my second text.i am trying to learn from your correction and try to improve my english.i need your guidence ,support and encorigment.

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- thanks all friends for correction.this is my second text.i am trying to learn from your correction and try to improve my english.i need your guidence ,support and encorigment.
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- tThanks to all of my friends for these correction.ts. This is my second text.i I am trying to learn from your correction ~~and try to~~s so that I can improve my eEnglish.i I need your guideance , support, and enco~~rig~~uragement.
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