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Text from DashaDAT - English

  • About myself

    • So, it's my second message here.
    • Thanks for the correction of my last message.
    • I've learnt some new very useful things from it!
    • Now I'd like to tell you a little about myself (of'course in order to train my English).
  • I'm twenty years old.
  • I'm from Russia and I live in a very small town called Berezniki.
    • I'm sure you haven't heard of it because even Russian people don't know anything about this town :) I really want to know English well but sometimes I think it's impossible because all the time I make lots of mistakes.
    • And I wish good luck for everybody who has such problems!

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