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Mini Essay: My Opinion About Advertising

• It is believed that advertising could make people to buy things which their do not need.

• However, some people think that ads help everyone to know benefits of products which are make our life easier.

• In my opinion, in ads I know about new products that could make my life more comfortable and pleasure.

• To illustrate my point, nowadays, exist so many ways to rich the end point consumer for ads, but some of that advertising do not help to sell more products.

• It could happen because of goods itself, some of them badly design, have a low quality of performance and sometimes hard to find in stores or in online shops.

• For example, I was trying to buy a new tires for the cold season because my car's tires were out of order.

• I had seen ads in bill boars by the road of tires that is made by a famous producer.

• So I searched in some online shops and cannot found anything.

• In conclusion, there are two type of opinions about ads, either it is bad or good.