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  • An essay about outsourcing

    • What considerations might move companies to outsource or offshore parts of their business and what might make them refrain from doing so?
    • A company that wants to outsource or offshore parts of their business, has to make aware of the consequences.
    • There are some advantages and disadvantage to look at by outsourcing to India for instance.
    • First advantage, are the lower labor costs in overseas.
    • The economist showed in an article about outsourcing, that the overheads in India are only one third in comparison to the US overheads.
    • Second advantage, are the conditions concerning education and schooling.
    • That article showed also, that college graduates checking credit card bills or reports for insurance companies rather than uneducated people.
    • Third advantage is the technical infrastructure.
    • More and more lager cities like Bangalore are linked to the internet.
    • This fact makes communication between continents easy.
    • On the other side of job migration are the following disadvantages we also need to consider.
    • First, companies hire good educated employees in overseas and in the consequence jobs back home get vacant.
    • Secondly, mass layoffs can harm a company’s image in public and for what a company stands for.
    • Thirdly, for outsourcing or off-shoring a company needs to provide know-how, so that service provider can accomplish tasks for them.
    • By doing so, more and more knowledge moves abroad and in the same time due to dismissals knowledge and practical approaches getting lost.
    • If I were an executive of a company that has the possibility to transfer business parts abroad, I would have my focus on avoiding the loss of know-how to foreigners.
    • Knowledge brings you the money whereas the saving from migration jobs does not.

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