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Text from DashaDAT - English

    • The first Message

  • Hello!
    • I'm trying to improve my writing skills in English, that's why I've decided to write a small text here.
    • I'll be really thankful if you point at my mistakes.
    • In my first message I'd like to say that this site's amazing practice of foreign languages for everybody! It's AWESOME!
    • And the users of this site are GREAT!
    • Next time I'll try to write another text which will be a bit longer :) Thanks a lot for your future correction of my text!
    • It's really helpful!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English