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- Hello!My name's Dasha!I'm from Belarus.It's near Russia.My hobby is reading ,floristics ,cooking.I go to English classes and want to know English very well!Can you help me?I can help you with Russian studies.My English is not very good,but and it is not very bad

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- Hello!My name's Dasha!I'm from Belarus.It's near Russia.My hobby is reading ,floristics ,cooking.I go to English classes and want to know English very well!Can you help me?I can help you with Russian studies.My English is not very good,but and it is not very bad
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- Hello! My name' is Dasha!. I'm from Belarus. It's is near Russia.My hobby is reading , floristics ,cooking. I go to English classes and want to know English very well!. Can you help me? I can help you with Russian studies. My English is not very good, but ~~and~~ it is not ~~very~~ bad .
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