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  • December 18th.

  • Today is Wednesday, December 18th.
    • Today in the school, Vivi gave me a balloon, she knows balloon twisting, I want to learn, she was teaching me, but now I don't have time, today I've tried :].
    • I think that if not write and improvise won't learn.
    • In my mind I know that I had a operation and all my life I must care to myself, since that day I know that I must do all without scared.
    • This evening I will be watching the Juventus match while I have a lunch.
    • I love do things with my fingers, I cooking, make crafts, make up myself and my friends, but my father don't like it because he said: "It's only a waste of money and time." Today we won't get come sun because the weather is cloudy.
    • By the night, I will be have done the letter.
    • Before the summer (July) I will hace come to the second semester at University.
    • My mommy are proud because the test for the admition to University, usually do it 60000 students, only have 5000 quotas, only the five better tests don't pay for the first semester, and I'm one of these.

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    • Today in the school, Vivi gave me a balloon, she knows balloon twisting, I want to learn, she was teaching me, but now I don't have time, today I've tried :].
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    • Today in theat school, Vivi gave me a balloon, she knows balloon twisting, and I wanted to learn, so she was teaching me, but n. Now I don't have time, today I've practice, but i made some, and tried :].
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    • In my mind I know that I had a operation and all my life I must care to myself, since that day I know that I must do all without scared.
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    • In my mind I know that I had a operation and all my life I mustSince I had a operation I have to take good care tof myself, since that day I know that I must do all without scared.. Also i realized i have to do anything without any fear.
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    • I love do things with my fingers, I cooking, make crafts, make up myself and my friends, but my father don't like it because he said: "It's only a waste of money and time." Today we won't get come sun because the weather is cloudy.
      Vote now!
    • I love to do things with my fingers, Ihands, like: cooking, makeing crafts, make up myself and my friends,; but my father doesn't like it because he saidys: "It's only a waste of money and timetime and money." ¶Today wethe sun won't get come sun because the weather isout is a cloudy. day.
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    • My mommy are proud because the test for the admition to University, usually do it 60000 students, only have 5000 quotas, only the five better tests don't pay for the first semester, and I'm one of these.
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    • My mommy are is proud of me because the test for the admition to University, usually do it 60000 students, only have 5000 quotas, only the five better testsy are about 60, 000 students every year applying for the University and they only have 5000 quotas and the best 5 don't pay for the first semester, and I'mi got to be one of thesem.
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