Text from vgrowlee - English
A miracle
- The hair shaved, the white skin over a large face, small eyes.
- He seemed older than his age.
- He was swollen, wearing a cute blue pyjama having too short sleeves for his size.
- He opened a map and with the forefinger he leaned over the Great Britain’s North area.
- “Here, it happened here.” He leaned the Sgun Choinnich Mor, one of the highest summits of Scotland, next to Ben Nevis.
- There are gorges and glaciers, huge tablelands which they narrow immediately and they become dangerous pathways.
- He affirmed that the landscape was breathless.
- “The sky is next to you and it seems that you can touch the clouds.
- If God could have existed, he lived there.” Maybe it is true.
- The closer city is Fort William.
- And it was over there that we started Sunday to get the top.
- He was with three friends.
- They went up for 1,094 m of height.
- “I thought that we could have changed the shoes because the ground became icy.
- I saw a rock and I thought: I put them here.”
- vgrowleeJanuary 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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