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  • A miracle

  • The hair shaved, the white skin over a large face, small eyes.
  • He seemed older than his age.
    • He was swollen, wearing a cute blue pyjama having too short sleeves for his size.
    • He opened a map and with the forefinger he leaned over the Great Britain’s North area.
    • “Here, it happened here.” He leaned the Sgun Choinnich Mor, one of the highest summits of Scotland, next to Ben Nevis.
    • There are gorges and glaciers, huge tablelands which they narrow immediately and they become dangerous pathways.
  • He affirmed that the landscape was breathless.
  • “The sky is next to you and it seems that you can touch the clouds.
    • If God could have existed, he lived there.” Maybe it is true.
    • The closer city is Fort William.
    • And it was over there that we started Sunday to get the top.
  • He was with three friends.
    • They went up for 1,094 m of height.
    • “I thought that we could have changed the shoes because the ground became icy.
    • I saw a rock and I thought: I put them here.”

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