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  • Homework

    • I have to write an essay about one meet between Andrew Manson and someone who deliberately makes life difficult for him, and how does he deal with it.
    • After all these troubles, Andrew found a cave in the forest.
    • It was all he needed, in the deep night.
  • The weather was extremily cold while that hard winter.
    • When he saw the cave, he immediately thought that the night would be a little better.
  • For the first time, he could imagine to sleep without raining on his face.
  • He got in slowly and at that moment, he stood in front of something that made him afraid.
  • It was a woman, the pale skin with red lips, lying down on the floor, eyes closed.
  • Despite this appearance, she seemed beautiful.
  • He came by her to check if she was still alive, and, when he was nearby her head, she bit him the neck.
  • He fell down, and stayed here for several days.
  • When he awoke after 6 days, he was alone in this cave, very thirsty.
  • He would get out the cave, to wonder some help but, the light burnt his skin.
  • At that moment, he understood that he had become a vampire, and that he would have to live the night and to feed with blood.

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