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  • About life

    • Everyone in this world are working to earn money and to lead a comfortable life.Yes ofcourse without money we can't survive.
    • But we must not lose our age and energy for making money.
    • We have other things to do to keep us happy.
    • We must spend some good amount of time with our loved ones.

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